Jump to content


Online Users

2 members, 23 visitors and 0 anonymous users

Google, Bing, Yahoo, C-man, fgolflfgol

Newest Members

  • RebeccaRPhoto
    1. RebeccaR

    Joined: Yesterday, 07:38 PM

  • DavidGouldthorpePhoto
    2. DavidGouldthorpe

    Joined: Yesterday, 01:37 PM

  • Loulou DaviesPhoto
    3. Loulou Davies

    Joined: Yesterday, 12:13 PM

  • SPMPhoto
    4. SPM

    Joined: Yesterday, 03:38 AM

  • Michael_BaileyPhoto
    5. Michael_Bailey

    Joined: May 22 2017 07:00 PM

  • cfwaller24Photo
    6. cfwaller24

    Joined: May 22 2017 04:28 PM

  • nsunarPhoto
    7. nsunar

    Joined: May 22 2017 01:55 PM

  • rhwasherePhoto
    8. rhwashere

    Joined: May 22 2017 07:40 AM

  • CLSPhoto
    9. CLS

    Joined: May 22 2017 12:06 AM

  • Mary G Madrigal PhDPhoto
    10. Mary G Madrigal PhD

    Joined: May 21 2017 10:18 PM

  • ClaireengelPhoto
    11. Claireengel

    Joined: May 21 2017 07:42 PM

  • moreskogPhoto
    12. moreskog

    Joined: May 21 2017 04:54 PM

  • emmacyrusPhoto
    13. emmacyrus

    Joined: May 21 2017 03:08 PM

  • actusreus73Photo
    14. actusreus73

    Joined: May 21 2017 11:25 AM

  • Beth KerringPhoto
    15. Beth Kerring

    Joined: May 21 2017 09:10 AM

Recently Added Posts

  • Beth KerringPhoto
    Attempt at 1st hook (YA/NA speculative fiction)

    Beth Kerring - Yesterday, 10:12 PM

    I'm still fairly new to hooks myself, but I like what Niambi suggested. The initial hooks do catch my attention, but I found myself more interested when hearing about the characters involved and wh...

  • man45000Photo

    Thank you all for your critique and I totally appreciate it. Second version is down below. This the hook and synopsis bit of the query. SECOND VERSION Khadija Abdullahi has seen more horr...

  • ThrashPhoto
    Academic background in Query Letter?

    Thrash - Yesterday, 08:31 PM

    fair. it'll only hurt if it takes words away from pitching your actual story, and may not help. If it does help, it'll be a relatively minor considerate for the agent. 

  • JeffJustWritesPhoto
    Pen names and personalities

    JeffJustWrites - Yesterday, 06:06 PM

    No but that sounds fun. Might do that.

  • eburtonPhoto
    Glass Domes (Fiction) - UPDATED

    eburton - Yesterday, 04:37 PM

    Thanks! Quick question - I know you said I should name my protagonist, however, my character remains unnamed and actually is not assigned a gender in the actual novel, so I've been a bit flummoxed...

  • rhwasherePhoto

    Bump. The query has been revised in the first post to reflect all your suggestions. Thanks!

  • rvehallPhoto
    Genre and Age?

    rvehall - Yesterday, 03:33 PM

    The characters are immature. Not naive like Percy Jackson but the 'not a care in the world' nonchalant way teens tend to only care about their world. I'd started putting it as YA Fantasy there are...

  • LitgalPhoto
    Academic background in Query Letter?

    Litgal - Yesterday, 03:30 PM

    I have a BA in history but no MA. Still I honestly think mentioning you academic work really won't make a difference. Either your query and your pages will hook an agent (in which case he/she will...

  • LitgalPhoto

    Actually you can't. Generally a contract covers submission and/or sale of any work COMMENCED during the term. So if you start a book in that period (let alone finish one) the agent generally has a...

Site Navigation

Latest Discussions

  • 264,773 Total Posts
  • 15,420 Total Members
  • RebeccaR Newest Member
  • 1,016 Most Online

25 users are online (in the past 15 minutes)

2 members, 23 guests, 0 anonymous users   (See full list)

Google, Bing, Yahoo, C-man, fgolflfgol

Portal v1.3.0 by DevFuse | Based on IP.Board Portal by IPS