Mr. Snugglymuffin's Rampage (MG Fiction)
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Posted 12 December 2010 - 01:30 AM
"Desperate for more funding" conveys a lot more urgency and immediacy to me. I like it! But, as posted above, the concerns of the MC always need to come first and I'd like to see that primarily.
rep: Caryn Wiseman, Andrea Brown Literary Agency
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