Hey Ireth the problem I see here is that there is not enough background to set the stakes properly. Every hook you wrote, and some where awesome lines and a lot of them are hilarious and very entertaining, but they seem to either hook with the surprise that she doesn't want to marry a prince because he happens to be a fae or that she doesn't want to get married and he happens to be fae. And yeah we get it that if she defies him he'll get pissed and hurt her but all we know from that is that the girl is in trouble, not that we want to read about why. In order to relate to her I would want to know how she got into this position in the first place
How about something like
When a Fae Prince meets Ariel he becomes obsessed with her and if she doesn't find a way to break his spell she will be lost forever.
I know you could do better but this gives a little more background on what she's doing there and why she needs to get away from him