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Liam's quest to preserve his sister's soul becomes a fight to save his own life.
Liam Farrell is devastated when his twin sister Evelyn is fatally shot on their seventeenth birthday. Eve's body dies in Liam's arms, but her soul is trapped in his mind. She shares his senses, and occasionally uses his limbs -- with or without Liam's permission.
To find answers about their condition, and maybe even the chance to give Eve a new body, Liam seeks the aid of a mage known only as Mist. Finding Mist is as easy as getting lost. Learning about magic and its consequences is much harder. And every day Eve grows less patient and more strong.
But other, darker forces are at work, beyond even Mist's full understanding. A sect of necromancers is hunting Liam and Eve for their own twisted purposes. When Liam finally finds the answers he craves, he must make a choice: to surrender to Eve and become a passenger in his own body, to let the necromancers take Eve's soul for their own aims, or to fight back and risk sending her and himself to heaven, hell, or oblivion.
MY SOUL TO KEEP is a YA contemporary fantasy of ##,000 words. [Personalization, etc.] Thank you for your time and consideration.