Hmm....I'm new at this too AMK, but I'll give this a shot. I am a little confused about one thing: "miracles springing from her fingers"? Does she have some sort of healing power or something? If you can clarify that it would help. As far as the ending of the sentence goes: "...entangled in court politics, Merewyn's fate does not lie in the simple life she desires, but in a destiny that will make her a legend." Or...something like that? Again, new at this but maybe an idea will come out of my suggestion. Good luck!
Thanks Diana. I like your suggestion, but I need it short and sweet--or so I'm told! I explain all about her abilities in the following paragraph of the query. Maybe...politics, Merewyn is fated not for simplicity but for legend. Urgh. No, that's not great. Let's see if we can get there together. I'll be back.