It really is a good exercise in condensing to what's important. #Pitmad is closed now and I don't think I've ever checked my phone so much in one day! I spent a lot of time on my first, quite a bit on my second and very little on my third pitch - I like the third the best! Here's what I put out there today:
For 16-year-old Reed, dying was hard. Awaking as a vampire: Shocking. Avoiding death to find why all this happened: Unlikely #Pitmad #YA
A car accident killed 16-year-old Reed, then two doctors made him a vampire. Finding out why could cost him more than his life.#Pitmad #YA
At 16 death brings many things: Superhuman ability,blood lust,a love triangle,a new father,an ancient race hunting you,the truth#Pitmad #YA
I got a like on the last one - woohoo!!! BUT, the lady who left it runs an editing service and doesn't appear to be an agent. She left no instructions on what to do, and could find nothing on her site related to agenting, or queries.
Anyway, it was fun. I got quite a few new followers to my new twitter account. @CMannwrites