Thanks for any/all feedback! Met an agent the other day who wants me to submit and now I need a query letter!
Updated query: http://agentquerycon...ision/?p=317078
Dear Uber Agent,
Just finding medicine in a world torn apart by hate is hard enough, but when smuggler Asha's caught in the midst of a concentration camp riot, it's all she can do to escape with her life. In this world, her kind are imprisoned, forced to endure Division, the Sodality's cruel practice of mutilation. During Asha's flight from the camp, she somehow shoots down and captures Prince Derrick, the handsome son the land's evil dictator. After getting to know Derrick's kind soul, Asha must choose between using him as a pawn in her kind's struggle to survive, or give into the yearnings of her heart and simply let him go.
After all, he's the only person she's ever known who's not hell-bent on torturing and murdering her kind. Women.
I am seeking representation for World War W/Division, a complete post-apocalyptic science-fiction novel of 115,000 words. Thank you for your consideration.