Hi Everyone,
I have finally worked up the courage to post my query for critique. My biggest question surrounds the amount of detail to include.
Thanks in advance
Jer
Newest query in post 33
See Take four below - post 20
See take three below
Dear unnamed agent,
Eighteen year old Veronica is not what anyone would call a model student. Constantly in trouble for fighting she has been vilified by school faculty all her life. In her eyes she is just doing the right thing; after all she only ever fights bullies who pick on the weak. It’s their own fault if it lands them in the hospital.
With her reputation Veronica’s future is not looking all that bright that is until she receives a letter that changes everything. Veronica is going to college. Sadly no one bothered to tell her it was a college for skin walkers.
As if a new school wasn't difficult enough Veronica has an entirely new set of problems. Was she really a skin walker? Could she really escape her past?
Is someone REALLY trying to kill her?
I am seeking representation for my young adult fantasy novel Veronica’s Secret about a college freshman trying to survive in a society of shape shifters called skin walkers. Veronica’s Secret is complete at 89,000 words and the first novel in the completed trilogy.
I would be pleased to send you my manuscript in part or full at your request.
Thank you