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Secrets of Ashes and Glass (Young Adult Fiction)


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#1 EmmaLucy

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Posted 18 September 2016 - 03:33 PM

Secrets of Ashes and Glass

 

The title has a bit more to it than just sounding pretty....

In the story, there are bad secrets (secrets of ashes) and good secrets (secrets of glass). I wanted it to sound catchy, but at the same time, not be totally random. 

So is it terrible? Or if you saw the title somewhere would you pick up the book and read the back of it? 

 


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Posted 21 September 2016 - 10:18 AM

I like it, it's mysterious but intriguing.



#3 EmmaLucy

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Posted 21 September 2016 - 12:05 PM

Thank you!


I am in some desperate need of synopsis help and am willing to return the favor.

 

My Query: http://agentquerycon...tional-fiction/  

My Synopsis: http://agentquerycon...tion-synposis/ 

First 250 words: http://agentquerycon...ion-first-250/ 


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Posted 23 September 2016 - 10:23 AM

I would definitely read it. This is the kind of title I like. 

Just out of curiosity, what would your second and third titles be, if yo had to choose alternatives? I've got at least 100 possible titles.



#5 EmmaLucy

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Posted 23 September 2016 - 10:34 AM

I would definitely read it. This is the kind of title I like. 

Just out of curiosity, what would your second and third titles be, if yo had to choose alternatives? I've got at least 100 possible titles.

 

Thank you! 

I played around with allot of titles till I finally found one that I thought would fit. 

 

It's hard to say because I had so many, but maybe these ones... 

 

A Tale of Ashes and Glass 

Shards of Glass


I am in some desperate need of synopsis help and am willing to return the favor.

 

My Query: http://agentquerycon...tional-fiction/  

My Synopsis: http://agentquerycon...tion-synposis/ 

First 250 words: http://agentquerycon...ion-first-250/ 





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