Disclaimer: This query is a few years old. I sent out close to ninety queries, received multiple requests, and got two offers of representation. The book didn't end up selling, but it was quite a ride and hopefully can help someone sending out queries in the same genre.
Wrong. Adrian’s road from heartbreak to a new beginning is hardly a smooth one. Not only does she have to deal with her ex’s new relationship with a Gisele look alike, but she discovers disturbing revelations about his behavior prior to their non wedding. And she’s just a tad (OK, a lot) jealous of her divorced parents' new relationships -- her father’s upcoming nuptials, and her mother's Demi Moore-esque hot new romance with a much younger man. And she has to work with the devastatingly handsome yet exceedingly arrogant (in love with himself) best selling author Jackson Taylor on an article for her magazine. And despite the fact that she dates a gorgeous British man as her Rebound, she really can’t get the egocentric (so so wrong for her) Jackson out of her head. Adrian soon comes to realize that it's going to take more than a simple How To guide to tackle the complex realm of matters of the heart.
My published clips have appeared in _____ and _______. But more importantly, I’ve successfully removed a couple of guys (without the surgery) from my heart.
How To Surgically Remove Him From Your Heart (Without The Surgery) is complete at 94,000 words. If you're interested, I’d be happy to send the manuscript over. Thanks so much for your time and consideration. I look forward to your response.