My name is John Angel and I just completed my new book. The working title is The Mark of Kaitlin, but I'm thinking of changing it. I would love and appreciate anyone's help on how to word the query letter and the log-line for the book.
In the summer of 1991, five years after capturing The Counting Man, Eric Spellman must face a new challenge...but, is he up to it? When two women come to him in a span of a few weeks claiming their husbands have disappeared, everyone thinks they left their wives for other women. When the women receive letters from their husbands saying they left them, it all but confirms they left...Eric doesn't think so. The events from chasing The Counting Man for so many years has left Eric empty inside. Can this new case bring him out of his shell in time to save the missing husbands?
As you can see, I'm not great at wording a query letter or a synopsis. If anyone out there can offer help, I would be very appreciative.