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#1 SarahThomas

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Posted 12 December 2016 - 11:56 PM

Right now, my contemporary fantasy about a woman with magic powers and voices in her head in titled Fighting Feyt, but I don't like it. It just sounds so tropey and bland. I kind of want my title to have some allusion to the voices, but I'm not sure about the ones I've come up with. My themes are: whispers, insanity, and storms. Here's my list:

Fighting Feyt
Squall
Clamor
Whispers & Fury
Tempest of Whispers
Barrage of Whispers
Edge of Silence
Waiting for the Whispers


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Posted 13 December 2016 - 09:14 AM

Of all of those, I like Edge of Silence best.



#3 KitCampbell

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Posted 13 December 2016 - 09:27 AM

You could go for Tempest of Silence as well (to smoosh two titles together) but then you're losing the whispers aspect.

 

I feel like whispers are notoriously hard to stuff into titles.



#4 SarahThomas

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Posted 13 December 2016 - 04:05 PM

I think I'm going to go with Edge of Silence. Thank you, that helped.
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