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#1 punitrastogi

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Posted 13 February 2017 - 08:05 AM

Presenting my first Punching Bag.

 

A short story that I wrote more than a year ago, with an even older idea.

 

I call it Funny Thing Time Is.

 

Would love some feedback on the story, writing, grammar, loopholes, suspense, etc.

 

Punch Away!! :)



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Posted 13 February 2017 - 12:18 PM

I don't have time to look at it now, but I LOVE the title!


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#3 punitrastogi

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Posted 16 February 2017 - 02:01 AM

I don't have time to look at it now, but I LOVE the title!

Thank you... I hope you did read it :)






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