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#1 onArete

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Posted 12 March 2017 - 09:39 PM

-Love from Dagen the Brave

-The Many Unfulfilled

-Dagen the Brave and Cowardly

-These Fractured Lives

-The City of Water



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Posted 13 March 2017 - 03:05 AM

Fractured Lives  - cut the these.  More memorable



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Posted 14 March 2017 - 08:14 AM

They strike me as different genres. What is the story about?



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Posted 29 March 2017 - 06:18 PM

This story is a fantasy YA novella set in a fictional universe.  It tells the story of Dagen (the Brave) who lives in a town where the weather is based on the citizen's mood.  She soon discovers that harsher weather- i.e. earthquakes, etc.- are linked to her mood alone.  When a twist series of events forces her to flee, she is found by an agency from the Cities, which lie just over the hills, to train with a few other teens who have similar mood-based powers.  Things happen, et cetera, et cetera, until she is forced to choose to join and help the villian or have her friends killed in her name.  She joins him- until things get so bad because of her actions that she kills the villain, allowing her friends to die in the process.

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Posted 06 April 2017 - 11:55 PM

This is just personal taste:

 

"City of Water" is good but makes me think of "City of Bones" immediately. And that's a huge franchise.

 

What about "The Unfulfilled?"


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