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#1 hakon234

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Posted 09 April 2017 - 04:29 AM

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#2 taylor lexi

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Posted 10 April 2017 - 10:23 AM

Interesting to read. I enjoyed it but maybe concentrate on being more descriptive. Thats the one thing, otherwise it was nice  :smile: 



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Posted 10 April 2017 - 10:50 AM

Hi Hakon, 

 

Is this the opening 250 of your ms? is it a poem?







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