Looking for someone to look over my novel as it stands. There are still a few holes and polishing to be done but I want to know how a reader will see it. example I want to know if there is too much, or not enough explanations of how the political systems work. The PM husband is a sports writer and I would like to know how the reader views his explanations of sports.
Willing to trade edits and opinions
currently as of this posting 128167 words. I ask at least take a chapter and give me your impressions.
it is on google drive