Hello everyone! I'm working on editing my manuscript currently and starting on my query letter. I would love feedback on my current hook:
Following the kidnapping of her baby brother, Lonko - a Guardian in training - deserts her training to find him and must rely on Neda - a failed Myrodiancer - to overcome the strange magic wielded by the southern raiders.
I've done a lot of critiquing, so I can handle anything constructive ;-)