Hey there, team, long time no see. Okay, I'm revising tonight and I've got this sentence. It just doesn't sound right. It's funky, I know, but I don't know what is wonky with it. I've tried rewording, but it doesn't flow:
"No feeling compared to that of have taken a life, or watching that person die, and knowing that someone will miss them."
Should it be "have taken a life" or "having taken a life?"