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QUERY-THE DEMON’S TOUCH
The Demon’s Touch is an 85,000 word paranormal romance novel written with Harlequin Nocturne in mind. Though it is a standalone book, it is the first of two featuring tall, dark and deadly men and the end of the world.
The Demon’s Touch is set in the Bahamas but when Sadia Delany arrives in the capital city of Nassau, white sand beaches are the last thing on her mind. She is on the run from a psychotic ex-boyfriend who ha s killed her once before. After five minutes on the other side, Sadia comes back with the ability to see the dead, a gift she must now use to help souls into Heaven to rack up soldiers for the battle of Armageddon.
Jacob Greco was born with good looks, the Midas touch and a deadly curse which has turned him into a demon slated to fight for the dark side in that final battle. He struggles to keep the demons slowly encroaching on his soul at bay by doing good and protecting the residents of the tiny island. At first, he tries to convince himself that Sadia is just another resident, but considering the fact that he breaks the law to protect her the night they met, she is about to become a lot more.
Everyone including Jacob, warns Sadia to stay away from him. She is the light and he is the epitome of darkness. Except Sadia only feels safe under Jacob’s protection, and the passion they feel for each other is stronger than all the reasons they should not be together.