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#1 Dahlia Baker

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Posted 01 June 2017 - 03:42 PM

Hi,
This is the only partially reasonable hook I've been able to come up with after brainstormingfor weeks. Please kindly help review. Thank you

No one is immune to natures chain of serial disasters. Not even Aisha, a young Fulani maid, who had spent most of her life living the privileged way.

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When Aisha, a young fulani maid is assaulted by her boss, her normally enviable life shifts, dragging in a chain of disasters.




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