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#1 ejmccay

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Posted 07 June 2017 - 06:06 PM

It's just a MS request, but I'm totally stoked. 
 
Fifteen-year-old Church Morgan is a spy—only he doesn’t know it. His parents have been training him to be a CIA agent since he could walk so he could infiltrate a terrorist organization. After his parents are murdered, Church is dumped into the one world he wasn’t prepared for—high school. Terrorists he can handle, socializing…uh, not so much.
An elite boarding school would be hard enough for a homeschooled kid, but now General Weathersby—a frenemy from his parent’s past—recruits Church to chase down a terrorist set to detonate a vicious chemical weapon somewhere in the United States. But the more he discovers about the terrorist, and the actual target, the more he realizes his whole existence is a lie.
If dealing with high school wasn’t hard enough, add being a pawn in a plot to dismantle the CIA and the threat to thousands of innocent lives. With a terrorist on the left and rogue agents on the right, Church will need all his skills to navigate his way through the middle and make it out alive.
CHURCH MORGAN VS. THE ACADEMY is a YA adventure novel complete at 71,000 words with series potential. It will appeal to the fans who love Daniel X action and Percy Jackson relationships.


#2 Monsmord

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Posted 07 June 2017 - 06:27 PM

Congrats!



#3 ejmccay

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Posted 07 June 2017 - 06:31 PM

Thank you. I'm kinda freaking out. lol



#4 SnowFox23

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 02:58 AM

oh wow, you got a full! So awesome. I definitely knew it had potential!!



#5 JeffJustWrites

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 10:35 AM

Well done! Great name for a MC by the way :)

 

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#6 ejmccay

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 10:58 AM

Thanks, SnowFox. :) What's cool is that she normally doesn't like spy/adventure, but she was drawn in by my characters.

 

And JeffJustWrites, Thank you. :)



#7 loopygoose

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 01:21 PM

I would have asked for a full just on your first paragraph! I love the concept. 



#8 ejmccay

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Posted 08 June 2017 - 02:01 PM

I would have asked for a full just on your first paragraph! I love the concept. 

 

Awww, thank you. :) 



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Posted 14 June 2017 - 01:03 AM

let us know what happens :)






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