"Statistics show that 42% of marriages end in divorce, marriage isn't the hearts and flowers you see on TV. Forever Yours is a gripping look at a marriage within the first year, a young couple learning to live together and overcome obstacles such as alcoholism and infertility. Throughout their journey they learn about themselves, each other and find the strength to make their marriage last."
What do y'all think?
That sounds like my guys if I wrote the book about how they got together! O.O
But all that aside...this doesn't tell me much about your book. I see your last two sentences are about the story but how are you going to make your book stand out on a pitch day? See if you can spice things up a bit...something like: Marriage isn't all hearts and flowers. [MC] battles the bottle, infertility, and learning to live together to try and beat the odds between divorce and success #Romance #A
Or something like that...I don't know your book, so that's a stab in the dark. But you want it to be quick, concise, and make it stand out. And make sure you have rooms for your hashtags, too =).
Mine's Rescue Me if you wish to take a look