Hello, i've finished a fantasy novel, Age of Exploration, it's my first book. I've been talking to an editor but they are expensive. I'm seeing how much work I can do first before I get a professional to read it over.
I've had a few beta readers and they really like my story but say I could use a little more character development and crisper writing. I don't disagree with them and i'm working on that!
I've made a few edits and updated some info. I would like for someone on this site to read my first chapter and give me all the news, good and bad. That's the only way I'm going to improve. I'd be willing to do the same back, let me know if you're interested. Thanks!