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My Life, My Bipolar Girlfriend and My Shrink

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#1 lake


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Posted 17 June 2017 - 08:40 AM

You know, the part in The Wizard of Oz where the Lion, Scarecrow and Tin Man go into the forest and see the sign, ‘I’d turn back if I were you?’ Every time I watched that movie with when I was a kid, I yelled at them to ‘turn back.’ I mean, why risk their life for a girl? And now, I’m risking my life for a girl. Not ‘just’ any girl but popular, smart, beautiful, and 'crazy' Holly Vine Gardener.



If we never meet in preschool, I wouldn’t be waiting here for Dr. ‘Shrink’ Saunders, to ‘cure’ me.  Can a person actually get another person to ‘forget’ the last thirteen years? He is charging me parents $200 an hour; maybe he can do something. Joke - The thing is, I don’t want to forget Holly. I want to be with her, and she wants to be with me; psycho ward of not.



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Posted 18 June 2017 - 10:26 PM

I'm not sure if you are posting in the right forum of if this is a hook.

If it is a sample of your hook, I'm sorry but I don't understand.

What's the story about?

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