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Critique Exchange - My Psychological Thriller for Anything!

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#1 LolaInSlacks88


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Posted 24 June 2017 - 12:30 AM

Hello there, fellow forum frequenters! I have a 165,000 word novel that I want to pare down to at least 120,000, but I'm having a hard time killing my darlings. The first draft was 215,000 words, so I made SOME progress, but I need that objective eye. My novel, STALKER/S, is a chimera of psychological thriller, post-apocalyptic, coming-of-age, and a smattering of LGBTQ. I can send a synopsis if you need to read more.


For my part, I have the time and am willing to read/critique anything you throw my way. I'm open-minded with no preferences (sounds like a Craiglist personal, doesn't it?). Maybe we could do a chapter by chapter exchange, or a certain amount of pages at a time?


Let me know if you're interested! Thanks :)



#2 EmmaWest


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Posted 19 August 2017 - 11:01 PM

Hello! I was wondering if you're still looking for someone with whom to swap critiques? I like psychological thrillers and the rest of the description sounds interesting as well. For my part, I'm about to start a second draft of a crime/thriller. If you'd like, we can exchange first chapters and see if we like where that goes? 





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