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If Prince Doras of Pluto doesn’t realize his power of generating ice beams soon, Pluto is out of the solar system. Thinking he just needs some adrenaline, he battles giant lizards. His guards save him in the battle but the near-death experience didn't awaken any power. He begs to his dead forefathers, but no blessing from the sky fulfills his wish. Prince Doras sends his highest ranking soldier, Ace, to Jupiter to convince King Rostoria against removing Pluto. In reply Rostoria sends Ace’s corpse to Pluto with a message that Pluto will be renamed to Jupiter II.
Doras begs Uncle Burter, Guardian of Neptune, for help but democracy has taken over in People’s Planet of Neptune. Their elected leader President Mandira has joined hands with Jupiter and Uranus, and they all want Pluto out.
Doras heads to Saturn where Queen Nyla promises support. Being the Guardian of the most Powerful Planet, with powers of lightning, Nyla confronts Rostoria against bullying a kid. Doras relaxes with her demeanor until warning sirens start ringing in Saturn. Nyla and Doras turn to the radar and see giant dots heading towards them. War is on.
Jupiter's Ambition is a science fiction/fantasy novel complete at 80k words written from multiple pov.
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