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#1 JGettys7

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Posted 25 July 2017 - 11:07 PM

Planning on participating in #IWSGPit Twitter Pitch on Thursday, July 27th and thought I would test out my hook here. I'm just glad I as able to get it under 140 characters:

 

 

The non-magical younger brother to a set of magical septuplets must hunt each of them down in a huge city, or risk becoming an only child.



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Posted 28 July 2017 - 06:37 PM

The non-magical younger brother to a set of magical septuplets must hunt each of them down in a huge city, or risk becoming an only child. (I like this. I like this A LOT. However, I don't know if it does your query justice. Explain why he must hunt them down. Maybe: The black sheep, non-magical younger brother to a set of magical septuplets must rescue his siblings from a magic-stealing maniac, or become an only child.)

 

Or maybe: The black sheep, non-magical younger brother to a set of magical septuplets is tested when his siblings are targeted by a magic-stealing maniac.



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Posted 29 July 2017 - 09:38 PM

Thanks. I might use that for something else.

 

The one that got the most views and likes was this one:

 

"Having magical septuplets for older siblings is hard. But finding each of them before a murderer is going to be even harder."






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