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#21 BoJo Johnson

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Posted 17 August 2017 - 07:21 PM

Mutt/ Annabel/ Lakiya is half human, half Were-Human, when she goes to learn about her human half she finds love, and a Were-Wolf stalker who threatens the lives of everyone she cares about, now she has to fight if she wants to save herself and them.



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Posted 18 August 2017 - 01:35 PM

YES!

 

That has all the "stuff" you need.  

 

Over time, while you're working on your query, you will fine-tune it and surprise yourself but what you have here is a great start.






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