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Siddhi: Vasitva ... or not?


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#1 punitrastogi

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Posted 10 August 2017 - 04:56 AM

So this is the latest synopsis of my book:

http://agentquerycon...16/#entry335038

 

As revealed in the later part of the 5th para of the synopsis, Vasitva (= ability to subdue and control) is a the name of a Siddhi (= achieved ability).

 

The book is supposed to be the first in a series.

 

My initial idea was to name the series as Siddhi, with this book being called Vasitva.

However, I agree with other comments that this might not click with the global audience easily.

 

So the question is a two parter:

1. Is Siddhi, the right name for the series?

2. Is Vasitva, the right name for the book?



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Posted 10 August 2017 - 06:35 AM

It's all about the audience. You're in Asia, so I suspect that your audience there would understand the reference easily enough. But from an American standpoint, the title doesn't resonate in the way you'd want. That said, it's entirely fine to have different titles in different parts of the world; I believe the first Harry Potter book came out as "Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone" in the U.K. and was changed to "...and the Sorcerer's Stone" in the U.S. Or maybe I'm mis-remembering that.



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Posted Today, 01:46 AM

I think if the target audience is Asia who are familiar with Siddhi Vastiva then it's fine. If the book is a success, then it would be a hit in other countries as well.

 

Bollywood movies have Hindi names. So Siddhi Vastiva is fine.

 

P.K Movie earned a lot in China.

 

American movies make money in foreign countries.


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