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#1 ruinerwarrior

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Posted 14 August 2017 - 03:38 AM

Hi all, 

 

I am looking for feedback of the story I am writing.

It is the first time I am going 100% for the story, in the hope of accomplishing a book.

I want to try to make a deep fantasy novel, creating a new world with rich lore and characters.

Because English is not my native language I am curious what you might think of it.

For now I am focussing on all kind of input, story wise, grammer, and punctuation.

 

I have made the story public on wattpad, It's long from finished but I am very curious how my English holds up.

 

Here is the story link.

https://www.wattpad....gg-introduction

 

Remember nothing is definitive yet!

 







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