I am looking for feedback of the story I am writing.
It is the first time I am going 100% for the story, in the hope of accomplishing a book.
I want to try to make a deep fantasy novel, creating a new world with rich lore and characters.
Because English is not my native language I am curious what you might think of it.
For now I am focussing on all kind of input, story wise, grammer, and punctuation.
I have made the story public on wattpad, It's long from finished but I am very curious how my English holds up.
Here is the story link.
Remember nothing is definitive yet!