Here a piece of my first story.
It's about a meeting between a wolf and the main character who is hurt and passed out, when fleeing from the wolves.
But the wolves mean no harm and have the feeling they must help him.
I want to make the wolf as it is a animal of old. being wise and using old language.
Now is English not my foreign language and was curious of your opinions.
if you have better archeic words to describe something let me know!
Wake up, descendant of Araël.
Wake up, thy Peacebringer.
I will not hurt you as I would not hurt the race of green. Wouldn't it be unwise to destroy those we need?
Those who give us air to fill our longs? Those who feed on whom whe feed?
No I won't harm you as I sense you are the one I need.
No I won't harm you as I sense you are the one Aërtes needs.
I feel you have a touch of destiny over you.
Who am I to question destiny? No, wake up and I will fare with you, towards your destiny. As it will concern all.