Hi! Soo, I have two hooks I want to use next DVpit...not sure if they're good enough, though. What do you guys think?
Also, if you want me to critique your hook as well, just post the link here! :)
1- Liv is a comatose 17yo with no hope of recover. When she hears her cousin's suicidal thoughts, she needs to wake up and save him
2- EVERYTHING EVERYTHING + 13 REASONS WHY: after learning about her cousin's suicidal plans, Liv needs to wake up from her coma