I know we're supposed to tell the agent why we want her based on something specific, but in the examples of queries that work, very few include that paragraph.
I cannot go to conferences or meet-and-greets, (disabled, since someone will tell me I should), so everything I know about the agents now is what I've read online when snooping over them. I'm also very directed when I meet people, and, it seems fangirling agents isn't a good idea. (Probably good I can't go to conferences, because I would fangirl them. )
So, could I see some examples that worked other than "we met at" for the personalizing paragraphs?