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#1 rachel.patterson

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Posted 26 October 2017 - 08:45 PM

Hi all!

 

I'm currently working on a romance story that I am very personally attached to, but due to this I can't tell if it's any good or if it's just the connection I have to the story talking. I'm looking for someone to give it a read over and give me a few notes, help to point me in the right direction. 

 

I'm willing to help someone else too, preferably someone of the same writing genre so we are on the same page! 

 

Here is the current blurb of my story in case anyone is interested:

 

How dare you?! I was happy. I was so happy and ready just to have a life. I was making things work for myself. I had a boyfriend, a job, I was getting good grades, steering clear of alcohol. And then...you. I suppose I should explain, in case you were just too drunk to remember. But I’ll also go back to the beginning. I want you to see this through my eyes. The way I see this. The way I see you. I want you to see what you’ve done, and how that makes me feel. At least then you won’t be as confused as I am. Because that is pretty confused, I’ll tell you that much.

 

 

 

Hope to hear from some of you soon!!

 

Rachel



#2 NavyGal

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Posted 03 January 2018 - 03:48 AM






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