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Sixteen-year-old Riley wants nothing more than to join the Unity, a secretive, militarized group of humans who seek to protect themselves from the influence of the Alphas. Raised by the Unity with her siblings, Riley is taught that the Alphas are the murderous, bloodthirsty puppeteers of every government institution in the nation. After another failed Unity training session with her mentor, Drew, Riley grows frustrated and loses hope of ever joining the Unity. Drew reminds her that she must keep trying, lest she end up like Jeremy Dillon, the latest supposed murder victim of the Alphas. That night, the Unity members seek retribution for Jeremy’s murder. When Drew is killed by an Alpha during the retribution mission, Riley’s sister, Emma, sneaks her out after school, determined to motivate Riley by detailing Drew’s death in the forest. There, Riley learns that Drew was actually bitten on the arm by an Alpha. But because a non-neck bite by an Alpha causes a human to become one, Emma kills Drew instead. Suddenly, Riley and Emma are ambushed by Alphas, and one Alpha pins Riley to the ground. Fearing a fatal neck-bite, Riley shoves her arm into the Alpha’s mouth in hopes of transforming into one of them.
When she wakes up the next morning as an Alpha, Riley realizes that she has committed the worst Unity betrayal. During an interrogation by members of the Alpha government, Riley is forced to conceal all remnants of her criminal, anti-Alpha past. She is given a new Alpha family and told that she must attend a six-month training session to help her adjust to a new life. Over the course of the next few days, Riley discovers her unparalleled competence as an Alpha. Under the guidance of her new family, she learns she has nothing to fear from the Alphas any longer. She even meets a handsome Alpha named Trevor, with whom she shares a mutual attraction. However, a museum date with Trevor is interrupted by three explosions set off by an unnamed anti-Alpha group. Fearing that the Unity is responsible, Riley begins to feel guilty for the deaths of the Alphas killed in the museum attack.
In an effort to cure Riley’s depression after the attack, Trevor invites her to a bonfire in the forest. There, Riley discovers Trevor and his friends partaking in illegal hunts against humans. Suddenly, the Unity falls upon the Alphas gathering in the forest. Trevor disappears, and Riley is attacked by Emma. Emma blames Riley for their father’s suicide, saying that he was driven to it by Riley’s betrayal of the Unity. Though Riley manages to escape from Emma, Riley’s former loyalty to the Unity becomes apparent to the Alphas in the forest.
Distraught over the events of the ill-fated bonfire, Riley resolves to find out if what Emma said about her father was true. But before she can begin her dangerous mission to find the truth, she is stopped by her former interrogator, Richard. Due to his friendship with Riley’s Alpha sister and their combined affinity for art, Richard has always been in the background of Riley’s life as an Alpha. However, she has never trusted him following his role in her initial interrogation. But when he reveals that he too has a history with anti-Alpha groups, Riley accepts his offer of assistance. He sneaks her into the Alpha administration building, where they learn of Riley’s father’s death. There, she also discovers how her entire Alpha family is a farce. Put to this task by the Alpha government, her family has been manipulating and watching her in an effort to gain proof of her anti-Alpha past.
After Richard and Riley are cornered by the Alphas at the administrative center, they barely manage to escape with their lives. Regretting all her life’s decisions and devoid of hope for the future, Riley resolves to run away and live out the rest of her life in isolation. Though Richard’s companionship in the wilderness alleviates her boredom, his presence does nothing to change her guilty conscience. After much time passes, Riley begins to blame her fate on the seemingly-pointless conflict between Alphas and humans. Realizing that she always has relied on others to help her, Riley resolves to take control over her life for the first time by revisiting the strife from whence she came. Though she is only one girl with an uncertain future, she is one girl determined to make a positive change once and for all.