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Israel Falls (Time Travel/Fantasy) 2nd Query Attempt

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Posted 17 November 2017 - 09:13 AM

I am getting great feedback from this query over the last one let's see what you query experts say:


In the far future, time travel is as commonplace as the smartphone, and the Wilson's have profited enough from it to be considered demi-gods. When shadows from the past threaten to expose their highly illegal soul trade and destroy their legacy, patriarch Henry Wilson is forced to flee to the past and seek out his younger self's help.


Henry guides his younger self's rise to power, developing a way to manipulate time that has never been done before, breaking every rule in the book. While trying to prevent the scandal he’s tormented by mysterious episodes of Déjà vu that he can’t explain. Word from the future is that a new technology is quickly making time travel obsolete by revealing a deadly conspiracy one thousand years in the making.


Past, present, and future collide as war looms on two fronts, and Henry is left with a choice to make: protect his family/timeline at all costs or continue making the changes no matter where or when they might lead.


Israel Falls is a (est) 80,000 word work of science fiction/fantasy.

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Posted 20 November 2017 - 01:42 AM

There's already a thread for this.

Also tagged with one or more of these keywords: Science Fiction, Fantasy, Family Saga, Thrillers/Suspense

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