Hello everyone, Decided to give my second book a chance. This is a first draft... I hope for starters it's good. Thank you in advance !!!
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17 yo Norvina wishes to spend the prom night she’s always dreamt of, when the love of her life tries to rape her, Norvina lights his suit on fire with her bare hands. Unable to control her powers, she unintentionally lights the entire forest on fire, and all the energy expenditure causing her to lose consciousness. 48 hours later, Norvina wakes up in a hospital. All she ends up with is a burn on her right wrist and no memory of her past.
A year later, Norvina walks in on a group of Latrons using an infused meson gun to kill her classmate. When she notices a picture of herself in one of the mens hand, she realizes she was the main target. Until today, she did not know deviants exist, but now they're after her. While the Latrons try to kill Norvina, she is rescued by an old classmate, Vulcan; God of Fire and ex-Latron traitor. Overwhelmed with unanswered questions, she learns that the only person able to help her is Volcan. They hate each other. They want each other dead. But they have a similar goal that draws them together -- kill the deviants. While they both attempt to defeat their enemies, they awaken the Latron leader and the deadliest human on earth; Black Death. He feeds on the souls of powerful humans and his main target is Norvina. With the Black Death after them, it soon leads Norvina and Vulcan on a vengeance obstacle course. It reveals secrets of Norvinas past and Vulcans true powers. What they end up discovering and what Vulcan keeps hidden, might drive them apart forever.
LONGING SOULS is a YA contemporary fantasy novel, complete at 85,000 words. It will appeal to fans of Marvel heroines and hidden identities.