HI There! I would really appreciate any help with my hook... I'm new to the whole query thing so bare with me, since I will make many mistakes!
Thank you in advance (:
It's a crime to have superpowers in New York City since the streets were filled with Black Death--- only feeds on the soul of powerful people--- and his men. The superheroes were extinct--- until one night a girl discovers her superpowers.
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