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1st chapter critique or swap- YA Fantasy


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#1 A. Wass

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Posted 30 December 2017 - 10:44 PM

I was wondering if anyone could critque my first chapter in my WIP. I'm not looking for grammatical critique, but more to check for clarity, world building, making sure it's giving enough information(but not too much) etc. I'd be willing to swap if you like.

#2 SharonMorrisWagner

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 06:08 PM

Have you found someone? I’m looking for the same. New MS started - about 20,000 words so far... This is my 3rd novel. #2 is pretty good - and I had two requests for partials but they both passed - I feel it’s just not unique enough for today’s competitive market. I hope #3 can grab someone’s attention.
You can email me: wigwags@comcast.net

#3 A. Wass

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 06:46 PM

Hi Sharon. Why don't we send each other our first chapter and we can see if we are a good fit? Then we can go from there if we would like to swap more. I'll email you.



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Posted 15 January 2018 - 06:55 PM

Hello! I've read your query and I'm very interested in reading your book! It really intrigued me. Send me a personal message if you'd like to exchange email addresses.






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