I'm looking for someone who's interested in swapping chapters. We can start with one and see if we're the right fit for each other. My MS has been edit by a freelance editor, but I still feel like there's a couple plot holes and even may lack voice. ( Even though it has plenty of details, I still feel the voice isn't quite spot on. I may just be paranoid, but it wouldn't hurt to get more opinions.) You can PM if you're interested.
Seventeen-year-old Norvina doesn’t look dangerous. Definitely not someone you'd expect to slaughter a squad of super-villains with just fire and a stick.
In a city governed by a mayor who calls himself Black Death, getting super powers is a plus. Unless you're like Norvina and want to fight the super-villains that Black Death controls. Then it's pretty much a death sentence.
When Norvina is attacked by thieves, her adrenaline triggers a mutation in her DNA. Gifted with power over fire, she roasts the muggers but attracts the attention of some bloodthirsty freaks. Only the last minute rescue by a young man named Vulcan saves her from being butchered by the ferocious freaks. Vulcan, Black Death’s ruthless son, wants to destroy his father. Norvina is hell-bent on staying alive. She knows the execution of super-villains will keep her alive, but the journey will lead to a definite death. But she’s headstrong and possesses a kick-ass persona and ally's with Vulcan.
With law enforcement and flesh-feeding villains attacking her at every corner, Norvina learns a daunting fact: Black Death and the government plan to mobilize an army of super-villains to take over more than just the city. Millions of lives hang in the balance. Norvina realizes she must do the unforgivable: She will have to become a badass villain to survive.