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#1 Mdane

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Posted 13 January 2018 - 04:16 AM

Hi guys, I'm in two minds over the title for my new book. It is a fantasy novel about an immortal assassin.

 

Option 1: The Other Side of Blood

 

Option 2: Beyond Blood

 

Please let me know your opinions :)


Desperately looking for advice on my query The Other Side of Blood

 

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#2 lnloft

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Posted 13 January 2018 - 10:10 PM

I like the sound of "The Other Side of Blood" better.


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Posted 14 January 2018 - 09:11 AM

"The Other Side of Blood" sounds better.



#4 TeaTime

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Posted 15 January 2018 - 08:31 PM

I'll probably have to vote for Option 1 as well.

 

The second is a bit too abstract & short for my mind to really take it in very naturally.


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Posted 22 January 2018 - 02:17 PM

The Other Side of Blood triggers more mystery/curiosity in the reader. It has more of  ring to it. Good luck!



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Posted 23 January 2018 - 04:24 PM

I'm not sure what The Other Side of Blood means, but it's intriguing.

 

Beyond Blood also works for me. Perhaps it's another book in the "Blood" series.



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Posted 25 February 2018 - 11:42 PM

I'll have to go with the second option. Although I don't understand either, the second rolls off the tongue a little better.


Would really appreciate a little feedback on my first 250 words: http://agentquerycon...ya-sci-fantasy/





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