Hey everyone. So that's the first 250 words of my novel. I'd love to hear your thoughts.
When strange voice woke her up, she knew something was wrong.
Siren screaming proved her wrong. Dull Metal construction kept screaming because some newbie tried to escape. An idiot, as she would say. Not a newbie, but the fool who may have some stupid ambitions, about sneaking out of this hell. Bunch of morons. When would they learn? Or maybe she shouldn’t be so harsh. After all, not a long time ago, Emily had the same dream.
She glanced at the electric fence and got up. The electric fence had stretched across the whole military camp. It gave her memories about the old time. Memories of escape. Once upon a time, lived a stupid girl with the foolish dream. She attempted or dared to fight for peaceful life and never succeeded. That poor girl, had the most miserable life in the world, because the traitor who caught her, used to be her best friend. This fact was more painful than physical torture because unlike bruises, friendship never heals.
Her watch beeped after the siren died. She was summoned to do her duty. To kill.
The girl got up barefooted and went down to the halls. The cold walls greeted. Those walls made her their prisoner. She became very familiar with those blocks. The tunnel that led to the entrance were built with same walls. When traitor came with an army, her cell blocks had the same color. Emily shook her head. Unnecessary bugs, she was too good for it