I could use some help with my query. I worked on it a while back, put it aside, and am back working at it. I'm thinking maybe it's too short? I would add a personalized first paragraph as to why I'm querying a particular agent. I would appreciate any feedback.
Updated query in post
3.5 7. I have no idea if it's even getting any better or if I'm making more of a mess..
Like all other fifteen-year-olds, Elora accepts the floating door that the deity Za resides behind, the dress that reflects a female’s purity, and the strict ordinances the town of Thermot enforces to keep the people safe from the harvester of souls known as Remintals . But that acceptance changes into questions after Elora learns that Remintals have harvested her parents’ souls because they rebelled against Za’s ways. She begins a quest to prove her parents’ loyalty to Za, but instead discovers a secret world and is confronted with choosing between a life of safety from Remintals or a life of freedom from ordinances.
The Questioner is a 94,000 word young adult fantasy novel with series potential that deals with blindly following religious decrees and highlights the problems with religious institutions and the people that run them.