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I have chosen to send this query to you because you successfully sold Aaron Clark’s My Home, which is similar to my novel, KARI, a 51,000-word contemporary young adult thriller,
For Kari James, the granddaughter of a sculptress killed fifteen years ago, the supernatural bond she establishes with her identical twin sister is one of the things she cherishes most in life – until the man jailed for the murder of their grandmother escapes from prison and comes calling. He stabs Rika’s twin sister to death in vengeance for his jail term, just as Kari starts to fall for the brash Thomas Kemp.
As Kari chases the murderer, desperately trying to settle scores, she comes to realize her twin sister’s killing is part of a bigger conspiracy than she could ever have suspected: One by one, the students of Graham High School start to die in a series of unsolved murders. As Kari gets closer to the truth and her feelings for Thomas grow, the greater the danger. Allowing the enemy to escape could cost her sanity, her happiness, and her boy friend. Revenging could cost her life.
Filled with the wonders and magic of film classics like Ocean Eleven and The Fast and The Furious, infused with the allure of heist novels, KARI will appeal to fans of Ally Carter, E. Lockhart, and G.E. Hinton.
Zachary Brown has published TONIGHT IS THE NIGHT AND OTHER STORIES.
I’m sending samples of KARI to you. Upon your request, I will send the entire manuscript.
Thank you for taking your time to consider representing me.