I was on here about a year ago but got really busy with student teaching and job hunting blah blah. Got some really good feedback on here that made me go back and edit my whole manuscript! So I'm back for more.
Will edit your query letter if you do mine!
Rumors of Beth Hawthorne’s father being the Wayfarer—the thief who snatched a powerful weapon from the eyes of history—died with him. Now a servant to her stepfamily, Beth plans to escape to the Royal Academy, where she can avoid her cruel stepsisters and impending war from the neighboring fairy kingdom, Arison. But Beth’s arrival at the Academy threatens the safety of all students when she meets the Darks—demonic entities with murderous tendencies.
They seem to know Beth, and they seem to like her. But can the Darks be believed when they name her the Wayfarer? Impossible, maybe, but she knows she is at fault when Arison invades to find her. To clear her name and end the war, Beth must race against the fairies to prove the Wayfarer is only a myth—if that’s even true.
THE THIEF OF AGES is complete at 113,000 words. Readers who love the high-stakes adventures of Patrick Rothfuss’s THE KINGKILLER CHRONICLE series, and the sophisticated magic of Sarah Maas’s A COURT OF THORNS AND ROSES series will enjoy THE THIEF OF AGES. Per your agency's submission guidelines, I have included the [WHATEVER] pasted below.
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