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Seventeen-year-old Ada, florist and enchanted plant wrangler, is out for revenge. When sky pirates destroy her home and steal her most prized possession—a necklace that belonged to her late mother—she vows to stop at nothing to retrieve it.
Ada’s journey takes her through a desert filled with riddle-telling sphinxes, warring Egyptian gods, and booby-trapped temples to the hidden city that hosts the docks of the flying pirate ship, the Stormborn.
But her plan to steal back her necklace and set the Stormborn on fire is foiled when she is discovered by the crew and held captive for ransom. The ship’s winsome captain, Hugo Thornton, develops a romantic interest in her, testing Ada’s steadfast vows of revenge. Now, not only must she battle the pirates who have stolen everything from her, but also her traitorous, corrupted heart.
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