Alright, so I haven't actually finished this puppy yet, so the prospect of publishing is far enough in the periphery that I need binoculars to see it, but I'd like to see what you guys think anyway.
"Glen knelt on one knee, head bowed respectfully, face furrowed in concentration. He’d never been particularly good at praying, which was pretty sad, considering who he was. Other people seemed to be able to pray in a language that was both beautiful and respectful. Glen, however, could barely muster the courage to say two words to the Divines.
After all, he didn’t want to embarrass himself in front of his parents.
“Uhm… hey,” Glen said, finally working up the courage to speak. “I… I know you’re listening. I… I’m not sure if that’s something people have a problem with or not. I mean, it would be kind of silly if they did, since you guys are really powerful, but I mean, I just wanted to make sure you knew that… well, obviously you know that, I wasn’t trying to imply that you didn’t know that, because you know everything. Well, or maybe...”
Glen sighed, wishing he could just start over. Unfortunately, Divines didn’t tend to forget things.
“I… I guess what I mean is… I know you hear me. I know that. I...I know I’m important to you. I can feel it inside of me, and when I close my eyes, I can almost see you guys watching. I… I don’t know why I’m so special, but… thanks. For watching, and listening. It’s… it’s good.”
Glen cleared his throat and awkwardly rose to his feet. It wasn’t much of a prayer, but it was the best Glen could do."