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#1 Kiersi

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 12:48 PM

In accordance with the rules, not posting any description, but more than happy to provide!

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 01:39 PM

It's a nice active, evocative word. My fear is that it might seem generic.

My impression is a commercial, thriller-type story line.

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 01:40 PM

The title isn't bad, but there are a lot of books with the title Burn. You want your book to jump out at a reader/publisher/agent if it blends in with others, it's not going to grab attention. Just something to think about...
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Posted 30 January 2012 - 02:19 PM

I think it's strong and can be directed in a lot of ways.

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Posted 31 January 2012 - 06:32 PM

Sounds good to me - I would pick it up.

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Posted 31 January 2012 - 06:34 PM

I think one word titles are difficult. It doesn't give me much insight, but it sound intriguing. Then again, I've seen a lot of books with that title before.

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Posted 02 February 2012 - 08:14 PM

I would pick it up and look at the cover. If it looked good I would read the blurb. You have my attention.

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Posted 06 March 2012 - 05:57 PM

This tittle is very intriguing. Something about one-word tittles always makes me drool, espcially if the genre and cover design is right.
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Posted 07 March 2012 - 08:02 AM

I also like the title but alas, it's been done before. That is always dicey. If it were me I'd put burn in the title, but have another word or two in there to make *it your own*!

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And fwiw, I would hope it would either be a thriller/mystery or scorching hot romance.

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Posted 08 March 2012 - 04:35 PM

Burn is one of those titles that you could get away with for your third bestseller, but for a newbie is just too generic (which sucks because its evocative and intriguing).

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Posted 19 March 2012 - 04:58 PM

I'd have to agree with the others; while it is a great title, there are just too many others out there. It would be difficult for a fan to find out more information about it, because trying to search would bring up too many results, I think. But it's definitely intriguing and eye-catching.
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