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When She was Young -First Chapter Crtique (Chick Lit)


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#1 popygai

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Posted 18 May 2012 - 05:09 PM

Hi!
would anyone lend a helpful critique of my over-edited first chapter please?
I am stuck!
Greatly appreciated!

#2 The Steel Man

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Posted 19 May 2012 - 12:49 AM

Yes, I will help. Send it to me. My work is not ready yet. I may need your help when finished.

#3 Sandi Perry

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Posted 20 May 2012 - 07:16 PM

I'll be happy tp look at it,
Sandi Perry




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