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    wildworks - Today, 08:48 AM

    I can't complain about much. It has a nice flow and I know the plot. The only thing I would cut is, "But a high body count isn’t all that’s at stake." It doesn't sit right with me and doesn't add t...

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    I'm glad to be helpful. I'll be sure to send you a link when I have a new query.

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    Thank you for your replies. Wildworks. You got a good point there. Didn't realize there were so many. Thank your for taking the time and re-writing the query. I will for sure take it to heart and c...

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    Martha Jarvis - Today, 01:24 AM

    What is the story that you as a writer want to tell? No one can tell that story but you. It can be as polished or ruff as you want it to be. It is your story. All artist get their inspiration from...

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    AStrode - Today, 01:12 AM

    @Wildworks: Hey thanks for the help--if you have a query up, just let me know and I'll be happy to return the favor. As for the Mennonite thing, Mennonites are pacifists who advocate for non-violen...

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    RSMellette - Yesterday, 10:58 PM

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    Hi, the journey paragraph is much better, but also has to be more suspenseful. 

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    Welcome! Nice to have you among us! I also have a short attention span lol. Makes writing a bit difficult, but somehow I can do it. lol Good luck!

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    Sinniona - Yesterday, 06:20 PM

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